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You have proven that “Less is more” and left me both satisfied and thinking (obsessing) of them! What a wonderful way to introduce their story and empower the reader to fill in the details. It gives their story a life on its own. And thank you for the “story behind”—always intriguing to read the genesis and Easter Eggs that led to the creation!

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Thank you! I love "less is more" it's like a mantra for me 😂 I'm glad we're on the same page with the reader participation.

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I like what you say about music as an inspiration. I used to listen to something when I wrote but when I went through a mad poetry-creating phase when I read some of them back it was all peppered with Interpol lyrics, and that's plagiarism.

That Meatloaf number is one of those marmite classics. Although I you have just given me an idea for a story prompt, which is 'write a story based on the first record you ever bought'.

Seeing as I don't mind embarrassing myself - the first one I bought was 'Ghostbusters' but the second was Bonnie Tyler's 'Holding out for a hero' which had 'total eclipse of the heart' on the b-side. So I can't really write that story because it's already been done. And I was only about 12 at the time I think so I can be forgiven.

The psychologists would have a field day with that writing prompt though, for sure. After that I got into Madonna. Eighties Madonna, mind, back when she was good and all the lyrics were innuendos.

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"I am like a six year old boy when it comes to Romance fiction. No, I’m not emotionally constipated. I am absolutely fine with love and romance in a personal capacity but to write about it?" ....You have just described me perfectly. I like to think I can write with emotion, caring and love but the r word, romance - I'm ridiculously bad at it. I mean, really bad. People who can, like you, I am in awe of and admire for having the talent to do so. - Jim

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Thank you, Jim. You know what, it gets easier. It really does. Writing about love and romance can be a deeply personal thing for us and it's not something we can just write to the world about. I think it must be the vulnerabilities and the worry about coming off as "cheesy". Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad we understand each other 😄

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Thanks for the thoughtful reply Hanna. And when it comes to my few sad attempts, the personal worry I have about being cheesy is foremost and full blown. Like Velveeta Cheesy, I can almost see the eyerolls of any readers. Haha. Seriously though thanks, Jim

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Jim-I've been to the states a few times and VELVEETA omg it made me laugh 😂 great one! There's nothing cheesier than velveeta.

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