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Garen Marie's avatar

Yay! šŸŽ‰ This is great news! I’m both excited and nervous for my critique. 😬😊

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Hey, don't you worry.

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Daniel Puzzo's avatar

You and me both! 😳

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Colin Devonshire's avatar

Great line: Such beauty in her youth. Such death in her beauty.

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Thanks, Colin!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Someone's heart clearly weighed more than the feather of Ma'at, methinks...

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Daniel Puzzo's avatar

Oh wow, I'm so grateful! Now I really need to polish my nonsense up to make it presentable :)

(I feel guilty for falling behind on your stories, they've been on my Kindle for a while now, all queued up and ready to go)

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

Hannah, I enjoyed this chapter very much. The writing was excellent with some outstanding lines like, "Such beauty in her youth. Such death in her beauty." The ending was a terrific nail-bitter and cliff-hanger.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I'm still not a fan of university boys, but they are in a tight spot! I can hardly wait for the 14th!

Where do we sign up for the giveaway?

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Just tell me here and I'll enter you into the draw!

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Sounds great! I'd like to enter! I'd like a real book!

How's that? 😁

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Tells me everything I need to know. Thank you for your entry!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I'll ditto Richard's entry, if that's ok?

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Yes!

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