Oh God... Now I'm suspecting John again, instead of Mrs McKinnon! I can't decide if Mary is trying to warn her about him, or if she's trying to scare her! This is SO good, Hanna!
I’m with Nicole! Is John good or bad? Is Mary good or bad? I’m on tenterhooks over here! The visions are chilling. Even though she may be annoying, if I were Frances I’d want my mama!
Oh God... Now I'm suspecting John again, instead of Mrs McKinnon! I can't decide if Mary is trying to warn her about him, or if she's trying to scare her! This is SO good, Hanna!
I’m with Nicole! Is John good or bad? Is Mary good or bad? I’m on tenterhooks over here! The visions are chilling. Even though she may be annoying, if I were Frances I’d want my mama!
My oddball mind keeps coming back to Rob out of The Archers. He's even taken on the same voice, and Frances has turned into Helen.
And I do love the classic mother in law.
This is really great stuff, Hanna. I am enjoying it more with each episode.
The sexy bit was good too.
Hanna, you have another winner brewing here. Great dialogue. Excellent work all the way around. - Jim
Nice writing! You have built a good story with intriguing characters and spooky ambiance- I’m hooked! 🥰🥰