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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Poignant in its description, creating a deep atmosphere of nostalgia, putting our heroine (and the reader) in a mood primed for fright!

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Wonderfully atmospheric. Classic gothic horror!

Really enjoying this story, Hanna. And so well written!

Hanna Delaney's avatar

Thanks Evelyn. I've gone a bit Stanislavski with a first person POV, but I'm enjoying it, even if it's not me who's lost an old life in Turin.

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Ha! Stanislavski! I try and do that myself actually. Write according to mood, as it were. Sometimes works!

It’s definitely working here though - the 1st person POV tells it wonderfully as I can really get inside her head. Makes it a little more claustrophobic, psychologically I mean.